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We have not used acrylic and water brushes before so that was a challenge. Thank you for emphasizing taking more time drawing. Next step the cardinal.
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Besides trying to keep track of the feathers and maintain transparency, I had a couple of other things that made this painting even harder. First, I made my initial drawing smaller than the original photocopy, which made it harder to paint fine detail. I even took a long break during the exercise to get in a better frame of mind. The other problem was that I couldn't erase away the residue from the tracing paper enough to prevent it from resisting the paint. Overall, I am happy with my painting and feel that I learned a lot. The video instruction is very well done.
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I like the head better now, but I could not improve the wings that much.
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Jane does such a good job with details. My attempt using watercolors and regular brushes.
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What a mess! Well, it actually looks better in the photo than in reality. However I learnt two things: Don't use canvas because you have it, like me. Paper would have been much easier as the heavy grain made it hard to paint details. Secondly, fine lines just aren't my thing. I also could not work out how Jane was managing to pick up paint on her brush for mixing without muddying the pile that she got it from. So, back to practice....
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Your barn swallow looks good. It isn't a mess. I think that working on canvas would have made this much more difficult, especially the fine lines. This was a difficult exercise, but I see a lot of successes posted for this class.
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Got this course as an early Christmas present and have learned so much from it. The wings transparency drove me crazy but overall I'm happy with how it looks.
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Let's call it done.
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I am a 73 year old woman. Two years ago I took a course that I enjoyed, Nature Journaling with Liz Clayton on the Cornell Bird Academy site. Prior to this I didn't have any experience with drawing or water coloring. I became very interested in drawing birds and plants and fr0m then on would draw most days of the week. Last year, I took Jane's Avocet egg painting course which I really enjoyed. When I saw this course, I thought I would give it a try. This course was very intense for me. I have had very little training in the fundamentals of drawing or painting. I repeated each section of this course at least 5 times or more. I really liked Bird in a Ball. I have made many, many mistakes and corrections but, I was determined to finish. Even though, this was difficult and isn't as perfect as I want, I am grateful for all that I have learned through my errors and Jane's wonderful teaching. This is as good as my painting is going to get at this point. Thank you,
Jane.
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Awesome!
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Pretty happy with colors and layers and contrast. This time for a pallet I used drawing paper over the sponge sheet in a Tupperware container - way slower paint drying time now. It seems this technique is between traditional acrylic and watercolor. I didn't put in much in the way of feather texture - maybe next time.
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Well done!
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@Steve Beautiful.
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I love the detail on the head.
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I envy your feathers!!! Nice job!
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I love your feathers!!
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Beautiful!!
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Woah ! So beautiful
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I'm using watercolor (Winsor Newton) instead of acrylics. Keeping track of overlapping feathers was a challenge!
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I especially like how you did the tail, and that you gave your bird a background.
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Those wings were murder!
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:-) I agree! You gave your bird a nice artistic treatment.
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But the barn wood is awesome!
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My image is so dark. I know what you mean about going for lighter tones, Jane.What a heavy hand I have with the paint. I had more subtle tones but dont see them in this reproduction. This was a huge challenge in so many ways and a great bird to learn on.
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I also had to pay extra attention to keep my base layer light so the bird was backlit. Your bird is just flying around on a cloudy day ;-). I like how it looks like the bird is looking right at me.
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This was a challenge for me. I am used to watercolor, and it was difficult not to be able to lift out color. I am not sure that I agree that there are no mistakes with acrylics. I made plenty.
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I think your bird is beautiful.
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@PL I think your bird looks great.
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